tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.comments2023-04-28T05:20:58.093-05:00thursdayschristy namee eriksenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16060061824713745679noreply@blogger.comBlogger107125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-33623014270620309312014-08-07T10:31:03.012-05:002014-08-07T10:31:03.012-05:00Fantastic! Fantastic! The Cold Shoulderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12033596738221600483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-19620985140542488112013-06-19T17:34:53.198-05:002013-06-19T17:34:53.198-05:00I think we might be from a similar tribe!
Kidding,...I think we might be from a similar tribe!<br />Kidding, love it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007170687130436478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-78009531512633810632013-05-29T21:50:33.003-05:002013-05-29T21:50:33.003-05:00excellentexcellentTaohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05833562881231473650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-69304311642633300342013-05-01T18:55:25.636-05:002013-05-01T18:55:25.636-05:00I like this one. We all have rented way to many pl...I like this one. We all have rented way to many places. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007170687130436478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-11908190598578112882013-04-18T21:30:32.621-05:002013-04-18T21:30:32.621-05:00"salt water into salt water" is a nice i..."salt water into salt water" is a nice image. A nice combo of enjoyable and mysterious in a compact form.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007170687130436478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-71671677070267872012013-04-18T21:27:50.064-05:002013-04-18T21:27:50.064-05:00Thank you.Thank you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007170687130436478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-44920487210809290972013-04-18T21:23:12.840-05:002013-04-18T21:23:12.840-05:00And the ending reminds me of hemoglobin and stars ...And the ending reminds me of hemoglobin and stars as mentioned beginning at about 28:00 minutes of the this Ted Talk on Peering into space, didn't listen to full episode yet, but heard this part when cleaning the other day.<br /><br />http://www.npr.org/2013/02/15/172136499/peering-into-spaceAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007170687130436478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-17481166440606369342013-04-18T21:03:59.400-05:002013-04-18T21:03:59.400-05:00Love it, "I lack the vocabulary to say...&quo...Love it, "I lack the vocabulary to say..." this piece reminds me of one of my favorite poets, who has this nice poem film <br />http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5VuscVmPRec&list=PLEFE23717F387C2A1Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007170687130436478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-46605870794649903852013-04-12T01:23:01.952-05:002013-04-12T01:23:01.952-05:00thank you for the courage to post this.
thank you for the courage to post this. <br />christy namee eriksenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16060061824713745679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-7040776088698260852013-04-09T00:09:48.752-05:002013-04-09T00:09:48.752-05:00Thanks for reading! :)Thanks for reading! :)christy namee eriksenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16060061824713745679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-4945407708973612452013-04-07T20:25:09.104-05:002013-04-07T20:25:09.104-05:00You done it again Christy, goes into my body like ...You done it again Christy, goes into my body like fresh air!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007170687130436478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-33147678560493341452013-03-29T21:59:11.818-05:002013-03-29T21:59:11.818-05:00Very honest and brave to explore the many layers o...Very honest and brave to explore the many layers of feelings. It is not enough to dose life experiences with cliches of thankfulness to intellectually understand life experiences.. I think true feelings of investigation, allowing vulnerabilities (like this), over time, are conducive to a productive life and more men should strive for this kind of emotional honesty. Otherwise they grow into abusive jerks. I like the honesty of this and the last three lines about language and culture are my favorite.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06007170687130436478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-84397218659835853222012-12-06T18:37:56.953-06:002012-12-06T18:37:56.953-06:00I usually have trouble reading poetry from compute...I usually have trouble reading poetry from computer screens but really liked how scrolling down added to the imagery of falling snow, making it almost interactive. <br /><br />Also it is a strong piece. The Cold Shoulderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12033596738221600483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-32107982306024430132012-12-05T20:17:35.951-06:002012-12-05T20:17:35.951-06:00ugh finally months later - fixed itugh finally months later - fixed itkIMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12737009172716868615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-40634082918434912162012-11-29T11:45:12.910-06:002012-11-29T11:45:12.910-06:00Thanks for posting this.Thanks for posting this.christy namee eriksenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16060061824713745679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-24239432837624921142012-11-08T01:58:47.809-06:002012-11-08T01:58:47.809-06:00excellent.excellent.christy namee eriksenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16060061824713745679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-6660990165990032232012-08-25T15:05:13.779-05:002012-08-25T15:05:13.779-05:00I wanna see with the right format! did you try pas...I wanna see with the right format! did you try pasting original text into ... wordpad/textedit something simple and then copying into blogger? sometimes all the formatting doesnt translate right, i know. tough to get your cadence, etc, in the block of text here.christy namee eriksenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16060061824713745679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-44584960631285017452012-08-23T00:22:05.775-05:002012-08-23T00:22:05.775-05:00something was wrong with the formatting in blogger...something was wrong with the formatting in blogger. the layout of this poem is wrong. oh well - kim t.kIMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12737009172716868615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-60037534860355439982012-05-25T17:27:42.534-05:002012-05-25T17:27:42.534-05:00thank you for writing! i want to also see a poem o...thank you for writing! i want to also see a poem of the actual tracks of your life. <br /><br />you inspired me to post a poem, too. i'll do that.christy namee eriksenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16060061824713745679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-63284258707293824572012-01-24T23:35:25.435-06:002012-01-24T23:35:25.435-06:00^^ thank you!^^ thank you!kIMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12737009172716868615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-18732119001743531722012-01-22T16:26:09.478-06:002012-01-22T16:26:09.478-06:00"like"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..."like"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-853712348362490652011-12-14T23:11:09.134-06:002011-12-14T23:11:09.134-06:00one reason i always liked the ugly duckling, thoug...one reason i always liked the ugly duckling, though written by an awkward white fellow, who himself was out of place in many respectsTaohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05833562881231473650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-91057705419354179942011-12-12T02:09:54.396-06:002011-12-12T02:09:54.396-06:00like!like!kIMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12737009172716868615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-86300867433285914822011-12-11T07:16:42.164-06:002011-12-11T07:16:42.164-06:00thank you ^^thank you ^^kIMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12737009172716868615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2125135836946148870.post-11594918654057296742011-11-23T06:13:53.094-06:002011-11-23T06:13:53.094-06:00i don't wish i could say that about Copenhagen...i don't wish i could say that about Copenhagen; and i can't,<br />about any place for that matter, but 'tis with a sigh that i read, re-read and commentedTaohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05833562881231473650noreply@blogger.com